The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts and the table give
layout
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the layout
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of the police
budget
for 2017 and 2018 in one area in
the
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apply
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Freat
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Great
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Britain. The pie charts illustrate how the police
budget
was spent
while
the table shows where that
budget
came from.
Overall
, in
both
years
, most of the
money
came from
national
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the national
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goverment
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government
and more than half
it
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of it
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in
both
years
was used for salaries. In
both
years
nearly two third of the entire
budget
was supported by the
goverment
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government
. The total
budget
for 2017 was almost 304m 175.5 of which came from the national
goverment
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government
. for 2018, the total number was 318m which is
almsot
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almost
14 million more than the previous year, 177m of the whole
money
was contributed
from
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by
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the
goverment
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government
. The least amount of contribution was by other sources, nearly 38m in
both
years
. Most of the
money
was spent
for
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on
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officers
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officers'
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salary
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salaries
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in 2017 and 2018. The percentage
however
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, differed
while
75% was spent for salary purposes in 2017 but 69% in 2018, forming a 6% difference. The least amount of
money
was spent
for
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on
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technology. In 2017 only 8% of the
money
was spent
for
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tech
porposes
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purposes
and going forward to the next year, it increased to 14% which is twice as more.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, both, years, money, goverment, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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