The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts and the table give
layout
of the police Add an article
the layout
a layout
budget
for 2017 and 2018 in one area in the
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apply
Freat
Britain. The pie charts illustrate how the police Correct your spelling
Great
budget
was spent while
the table shows where that budget
came from. Overall
, in both
years
, most of the money
came from national
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the national
goverment
and more than half Correct your spelling
government
it
in Change preposition
of it
both
years
was used for salaries.
In both
years
nearly two third of the entire budget
was supported by the goverment
. The total Correct your spelling
government
budget
for 2017 was almost 304m 175.5 of which came from the national goverment
. for 2018, the total number was 318m which is Correct your spelling
government
almsot
14 million more than the previous year, 177m of the whole Correct your spelling
almost
money
was contributed from
the Change preposition
by
goverment
. The least amount of contribution was by other sources, nearly 38m in Correct your spelling
government
both
years
.
Most of the money
was spent for
Change preposition
on
officers
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officers'
officer's
salary
in 2017 and 2018. The percentage Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
however
, differed Add the comma(s)
,however
while
75% was spent for salary purposes in 2017 but 69% in 2018, forming a 6% difference. The least amount of money
was spent for
technology. In 2017 only 8% of the Change preposition
on
money
was spent for
tech Change preposition
on
porposes
and going forward to the next year, it increased to 14% which is twice as more.Correct your spelling
purposes
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