A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

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Dear Anna, I hope everything is going well for you. I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my home and Luna, my dog, during my vacation. I am planning to stay with my mom in Paris for 15 days on

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vacation. I will be available

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WhatsApp and I will

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send you my mom's number for any communication. Luna is friendly and fastly adaptive. You might wash her body once a week. I have bought dog food for her and it's kept in the kitchen. The dog instructor will come every Monday to teach her. I have kept the home key under the flower pot. Please water the pants on alternate days. please check my post box at least once a week. I have

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bought groceries and it kept in the kitchen. If you need anything more, there is a supermarket available two-

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walk from the home. See you soon Jennifer

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

160 words

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