Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays some young

people

seem to

act

different

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differently

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comparing

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to teenagers from the previous generation they are sometimes not polite and show less respect to others or to older

people

, of

coarse

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course

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there are several reasons that led them to

act

such

a way. On the one hand, there is a reason behind these actions coming from these young

people

This

current generation is probably raised

different

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differently

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also

parents

play a big role. They should be aware

about

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any

behavior

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behaviour

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and should follow the reason that led their child to

act

less polite or be disrespectful.

In addition

internet

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the internet

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has a role in

this

whole situation

that is

happening.

For example

: when a teenager spends a lot of time

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the internet watching a lot of videos and listening to

people

fight or watching inappropriate movies

therefore

the child will learn a lot of awful words, leading him to be less respective and

act

differently.

On the other hand

this

problem can be solved by behaving in an appropriate way. As I mentioned before

that

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parents

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parent's

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role in

this

is important

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because they can talk to their children if they did any disrespectful

behavior

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behaviour

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towards others.

Moreover

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parents

should let these young

people

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spend less time on the internet,

such

as playing aggressive video games.

Besides

, to let them spend their free time reading a book. In conclusion, if

parents

weren't aware of the

child

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child's

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behavior

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behaviour

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from a young age,

this

would result later

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acting

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act

less polite to

people

and

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being

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disrespectful to others.

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Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

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