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Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

#people #show #respect #generations
Nowadays some young
people
 seem to
act
different
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,
comparing
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 to teenagers from the previous generation they are sometimes not polite and show less respect to others or to older
people
, of
coarse
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course
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 there are several reasons that led them to
act
 in
such
 a way. On the one hand, there is a reason behind these actions coming from these young
people
.
This
 current generation is probably raised
different
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also
,
parents
 play a big role. They should be aware
about
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 any
behavior
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behaviour
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 and should follow the reason that led their child to
act
 less polite or be disrespectful.
In addition
,
internet
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the internet
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 has a role in
this
 whole situation
that is
 happening.
For example
: when a teenager spends a lot of time
in
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on
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 the internet watching a lot of videos and listening to
people
 fight or watching inappropriate movies
therefore
 the child will learn a lot of awful words, leading him to be less respective and
act
 differently.
On the other hand
,
this
 problem can be solved by behaving in an appropriate way. As I mentioned before
that
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parents
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parent's
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 role in
this
 is important
,
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 because they can talk to their children if they did any disrespectful
behavior
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behaviour
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 towards others.
Moreover
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parents
 should let these young
people
to
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spend less time on the internet,
such
 as playing aggressive video games.
Besides
, to let them spend their free time reading a book. In conclusion, if
parents
 weren't aware of the
child
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child's
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behavior
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behaviour
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 from a young age,
this
 would result later
to
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acting
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act
 less polite to
people
 and
be
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being
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 disrespectful to others.
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