Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays some young

people

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seem to

act

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different

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comparing

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to teenagers from the previous generation they are sometimes not polite and show less respect to others or to older

people

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, of

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there are several reasons that led them to

act

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such

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a way. On the one hand, there is a reason behind these actions coming from these young

people

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current generation is probably raised

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also

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parents

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play a big role. They should be aware

about

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any

behavior

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and should follow the reason that led their child to

act

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less polite or be disrespectful.

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internet

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has a role in

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whole situation

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happening.

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: when a teenager spends a lot of time

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the internet watching a lot of videos and listening to

people

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fight or watching inappropriate movies

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the child will learn a lot of awful words, leading him to be less respective and

act

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differently.

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this

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problem can be solved by behaving in an appropriate way. As I mentioned before

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parents

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role in

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is important

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because they can talk to their children if they did any disrespectful

behavior

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towards others.

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parents

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should let these young

people

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spend less time on the internet,

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as playing aggressive video games.

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, to let them spend their free time reading a book. In conclusion, if

parents

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weren't aware of the

child

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behavior

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from a young age,

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would result later

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act

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less polite to

people

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and

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disrespectful to others.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

Your opinion

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation. Such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both points and express your opinion.

In certain nations, parents have high academic expectations for their children, resulting in limited leisure time. What could be the potential benefits and drawbacks of this for the children and the society they are part of

2. Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today more and more people wants things instantly (e.g.: goods, services, news,). Why is it? Is it positive or negative development?