Recently, the retail company you work for has been losing customers to a competitor. The company is setting up a scheme to encourage customers to stay with the company. Your boss has asked you to write a letter to the customers on your database outlining this customer loyalty scheme. Write the letter to your customers: •describing the benefits for customers of the loyalty scheme •explaining what customers must do to join the scheme •giving details of a special promotion to launch the scheme • reminding customers of the quality of your goods.
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Dear Sir
My name is Vy. I'm a co-worker from the BBC company. I'm writing to let you know that
this
customer loyalty scheme will organize on 23, Mel street on 13, march, 2023.
I would like to tell you about some benefits of this
program. Firstly
, we have a new product line and send it to you for trial free. Besides
that, we have some special gifts for loyal customers
. Secondly
, we have a concert for grateful when you stay with us since the company started the business.
This
celebration holds on and saves the memories for us. I would like to overview and give some details about the event. Firstly
, we need to introduce our company. Secondly
, we have music. Finally
, we will talk about a new product line.
The new product line will release market on the next month. We would like to bring out the best in customers
and help customers
to have a better life. It's good quality and helps customers
detox and release
bad things from their Change the verb form
releases
body
.
I hope you can join us and I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Please let me know if you join Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
this
program as I attached the file below.
Thanks and regards
Vy NguyenSubmitted by nguyenhungvy090499 on
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