Recently, the retail company you work for has been losing customers to a competitor. The company is setting up a scheme to encourage customers to stay with the company. Your boss has asked you to write a letter to the customers on your database outlining this customer loyalty scheme. Write the letter to your customers: •describing the benefits for customers of the loyalty scheme •explaining what customers must do to join the scheme •giving details of a special promotion to launch the scheme •reminding customers of the quality of your goods.

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