The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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This
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picture shows 7 steps in brick manufacture in the building industry.
To begin
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with, workers
use
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diggers to excavate
clay
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and gather them.
Then
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they put
clay
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into a metal grid to sift out block
clay
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.
Besides
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, rollers can be used to transport
clay
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into the next step, which pour sand and water into the
clay
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and
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them.
Next,
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workers can
use
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a mould to generate standard
bricks
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or just
use
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a wire cutter to cut the material in order to make
bricks
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. Fourth,
bricks
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would be stored in the drying oven for 24~48 hours to dry out the moisture. The next step contains three processes, which
use
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moderate(200~900) and high(870~1300) temperatures to bake them.
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use
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a cooling chamber to chill them for 48~72 hours. After these five steps, the
bricks
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could be piled together and packaged .
Finally
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, workers could
use
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trucks to deliver them to building industries. In conclusion, these steps give a short introduction to how to manufacture
bricks
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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