Task 1 Academic: The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.

Task 1 Academic: The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.
The graph illustrates the volume of
cheese
consumption in four different countries from 1980 to 2020. The units were measured in kilograms.
Overall
, there was a gradual increase in Wales and Northern Ireland
while
England and Scotland experienced a downward trend.
However
, England has the largest volume of
cheese
consumers. In 1980, England was recorded as having the highest
cheese
consumption which started at around 110
Kg
and gradually decreased to 100
Kg
in 2000 until reached roughly 80
Kg
in 2020. Scotland was ranked as the second where purchased
cheese
around 80
Kg
initially
and hit a ceiling of around 110
Kg
in the next ten years
then
slightly declined by approximately 58
Kg
throughout the period.
On the other hand
, the others two countries experienced steady growth. At the beginning of time, the number of
cheese
buyers in Walse was about 45
Kg
and slowly went up to 70
Kg
in 2000.
Likewise
, there was a slight increase in Northern Ireland rising from 12
Kg
in 1890 to 30
Kg
in 2000 and was followed by a dramatic rise of 60
Kg
throughout the period.
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