Governments should focus their  spending on public services rather than on arts such as Music and Painting. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

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the money of the

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has to be spent on services, that are in

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by their society than on entertainment,

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as music, painting and to be exactly,

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of ART. With what other parts of communities disagree. To take into account the fact that both sides of spending can lead to important developments in the country, I support ideas. The first factor to consider is that the budget of the

Government

party cash from society, which was taken in several ways

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as tax, rent for territory and break a law. And it would be better to invest money to update the old-fashioned public transport or state

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hospitals to improve public services and show an abundance of comfort for people. Another worth point to mention is that ART has been taking a vital position for every culture and presenting their story and worldview. But, it's the necessary industry which requires

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investment to not be stuck in one state and lift the young generation with talents in music and painting or to save the accuracy of popular paintings. Even more,

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industry attracts foreign travellers to attend ART shows and the money which would cover the spending of

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. In conclusion, I want to provide the importance of focusing on two uncomparably things that can change not only the attitude of the

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condition there to a better way and I stay with balanced opinion.