The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart
give
information about journey Change the verb form
gives
why
humans journey to Correct word choice
and why
job
by bicycle or by car.
It is Add an article
the job
a job
clearly
that Replace the word
clear
two
charts illustrate to about compare Correct article usage
the two
traveling
tools during Change the spelling
travelling
Add an article
the period
a period
period
of Fix the agreement mistake
periods
work
. Moreover
pie charts have Add a comma
,Moreover
Replace the word
especially
specially
advantages and disadvantages, Replace the word
special
for
example
Add a comma
,example
travellling
by Correct your spelling
travelling
bcyling
Correct your spelling
bicycling
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
impact
Add an article
an impact
the impact
to
the environment and spend less cost than other vehicles so no problems Change preposition
on
at
the parking area, faster than driving , impact your health for the reason cycling Change preposition
in
more
popular exercise in whole sport species. Add a missing verb
is more
Meanwhile
car driving Add a comma
,Meanwhile
have
comfort, distance to Change the verb form
has
work
, safer than cycling, faster than cycling and need
to carry things to Correct article usage
the need
work
but this
situation depend
on Change the verb form
depends
professional
level.
Add an article
a professional
the professional
Reason
for cycling has Correct article usage
The reason
high
rate Add an article
a high
in
less pollution and health and fitness same number Change preposition
of
30
% percentage.Change preposition
of 30
While
reason
for driving to Add an article
the reason
work
huge promotion in comfort distance to work
40%, 21
% respectively.
Correct word choice
and 21
Nevertheless
cycling to work
tiny rate in
faster than cycling, Correct your spelling
is
safer
than cycling need to carry things to Correct word choice
and safer
work
14
%,14%,Change preposition
at 14
11
% respectively. Correct word choice
and 11
On the other hand
travel cycling to work
faster than driving, low costs, no parking problems 12%,13%,15%Submitted by vasif.askerlii on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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