The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart
give
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gives

The plural verb give does not appear to agree with the singular subject The pie chart. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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information about journey
why
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and why

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humans journey to
job
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the job
a job

The noun phrase job seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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by bicycle or by car. It is
clearly
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clear

The word clearly doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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that
two
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the two

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charts illustrate to about compare
traveling
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travelling

The spelling of traveling is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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tools during
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the period
a period

The noun phrase period seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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period
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periods

It seems that period may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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of
work
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

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Linking Words
Linking Words

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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

Moreover
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,Moreover

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Moreover. Consider adding a comma.

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pie charts have
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especially
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specially
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special

The word specially doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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advantages and disadvantages,
for
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

example
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,example

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travellling
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travelling

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by
bcyling
Correct your spelling
bicycling

If you don’t want bcyling to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

have
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has

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impact
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an impact
the impact

The noun phrase impact seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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to
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on

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the environment and spend less cost than other vehicles so no problems
at
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in

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the parking area, faster than driving , impact your health for the reason cycling
more
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is more

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popular exercise in whole sport species.
Meanwhile
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,Meanwhile

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Meanwhile. Consider adding a comma.

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car driving
have
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has

The plural verb have does not appear to agree with the singular subject car driving. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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comfort, distance to
work
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, safer than cycling, faster than cycling and
need
Correct article usage
the need

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to carry things to
work
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

but
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

situation
depend
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depends

The plural verb depend does not appear to agree with the singular subject this situation. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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on
professional
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a professional
the professional

The noun phrase professional level seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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level.
Reason
Correct article usage
The reason

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for cycling has
high
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a high

The noun phrase high rate seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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rate
in
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of

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less pollution and health and fitness same number
30
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of 30

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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% percentage.
While
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

reason
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the reason

The noun phrase reason seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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for driving to
work
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

huge promotion in comfort distance to
work
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

40%,
21
Correct word choice
and 21

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% respectively.
Nevertheless
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

cycling to
work
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

tiny rate
in
Correct your spelling
is

The word in doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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faster than cycling,
safer
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and safer

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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than cycling need to carry things to
work
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

14
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at 14

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%,14%,
11
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and 11

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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% respectively.
On the other hand
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

travel cycling to
work
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

faster than driving, low costs, no parking problems 12%,13%,15%

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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