Some people think that child care centres provide the best services for children of pre school age.other working parents think that family members such as grand parents will be better careers for their kids.discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

era of globalisation, some individuals believe that childcare

centers

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are the best place for

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kids

while

others think that grandparents are the brilliant choice

to

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looking

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after their

children

. From my personal point of view, childcare

centers

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introduced

children

to

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veriety

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variety

of activities and knowledge.

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,

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essay will

further

elaborate

both

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views and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. In regard

with

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the first statement, daycare

centers

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enhance

students

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knowledge and

creativities

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at

young

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age.

This

institution

offer

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a mix of education, care and recreational programs to suit

children

of different ages.

For example

, most of these

centers

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provided indoor and outdoor areas

as well as

sufficient

equipments

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for

kids

to perform their daily activities.

Thus

,

parents

don't have to worry since their

children

will

busy

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with their own

schedule

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and have proper care

by

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the staffs

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staffs

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there.

On the other hand

, some parties support that

parents

are

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should be looking after their

kids

also

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have their own points. As the

children

's kidnapping rate

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increase

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in the past decades,

parents

were

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hesitated to let their

toodlers

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toddlers

in other's

hand

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.

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, in Malaysia, most

of

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kidnapping

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cases

are

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happen

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at

the

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childcare

centers

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because the

villians

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villains

are looking for an organ to sell.

Hence

,

parents

are afraid that these unwanted situations might

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their offspring's life.

To conclude

, every

parents

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want the best for their heirs.

Thus

, the ideal solution for their

kids

is by letting their own relative

to

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take care of them since they are more familiar

and

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reduce the chance of getting kidnap by strangers or being mistreated by

nursery's

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workers.