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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The provided bar chart shows in percentage how much Britain's inhabitants donated on the basis of their age in two different years 1990 and 2010.
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, we can clearly see that the group who donated the less is represented by the youngest (18-25) in the year 2010,
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 the most generous group has been the one that goes from 36 to 50 years old in 2010,
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 the peak of 45%. Let's have a look at the figures in a more detailed way. As the chart reveals, the three youngest generations (from 18 to 50) have been more interested
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 charities in the 90s than in 2010.
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, the eldest groups' money given to non-profit organisations increased in the 21st century.
To sum up
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, adult and old people seem to be more intentioned to invest their savings into charitable foundations than young individuals.
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, in general, it appears that folks were more concerned about poor and ill people in the past than in recent years.

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