You left a bag in the cinema of this city that you were visiting. You want to recover the bank. Write a letter to the cinema manager. In your letter give detail of your visit. Describe the bag and its content. Explain what you want the manager to do

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Dear sir, I am Mr Smith from Ambala city, working as a cashier in Indian bank. I am writing to you to inform you that I forgot my

bag

at Galaxy Cinema, situated in model town.

Last

Friday, 12 February 2003. I visited your cinema hall with my family and I booked tickets online, numbers are D 17 to D20 in Auditorium no.3. These tickets are for the movie Black tears for the evening show which started at 6:15 PM. On that evening, during intermission I went to a concession stand to take some snacks, I thought that I left my

bag

near the nachos area because I bought it from there. The

bag

is black in colour and is brand ARDO.

Furthermore

, it is 48 cm and 24 cm in length and width respectively. In that

bag

, my driving license, my credit card and around 2000 cash and my home Keys. I would really appreciate you if you help me to get my

bag

back. Please check the camera's recording in that particular area once and ask your staff if they find that

bag

. So that I will get my

bag

back. Please inform me via email at [email protected]. I hope you will surely help me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Please let me know if you require any

further

information. Your's

Sincerely

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, Smith.

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