The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women on diffrernt age groups who did regular activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of different ages of
men
and women
who do typical exercise in Australia in the year 2010.
Overall
, in every range of age, the percentage of women
who did regular exercise is higher than men
except for those who were 15 to 24 years old.
Looking into the details, it could be seen that people in 35 to 44 has the biggest difference between the number of male and female which of around 12% followed by roughly 10% of those who 45 to 54 year of age and lastly
approximately 8% of those who is 55 to 64 years old.
On the other hand
, people who were above 65 were more likely to exercise regularly both men
and women
, they have almost the same proportion, the percentage of women
was 47.1% while
men
are 46.7%. Moreover
, teenagers between 15 to 24 years of age especially female
occupied the greatest percentage which was 52.8% meanwhile in males was 52.8%.Fix the agreement mistake
females
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