As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that big corporates should not only make money

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but

also

must have duties towards society,

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essay totally agrees with

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statement, I believe that the aim of a business should be beyond just making

profit

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. First of all, we are all aware that companies already pay

big

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amount

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of taxes to governments ;

however

, that doesn't mean that their duty to society is

fullfiled

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fulfilled

, companies should help local and close societies, especially those where the majority of their labour come from and

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eventually

, will benefit the company in the long run,

for instance

, if the corporate

helps

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in the

repairements

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requirements

of roads and help in the built of some facilities,

this

will not only satisfy the local individuals, but

also

employers will have the sense that they are working for a higher cause which will make even work harder and be more productive and

as a result

, the company will get higher income.

Secondly

,

businesses'

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owners should initiate

cooporation

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cooperation

corporation

with local

cuncils

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councils

to improve life in rural areas, those places have deficiencies in many fields and

as a consequence

, life there is difficult and locals suffer;

Therefore

, big corporates should start building factories there to create job opportunities for people, and

also

provide them with

transporation

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transportation

so it would be easier for them to come to work.

Moreover

, Local

cuncils

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councils

face problems

while

building roads and other facilities

due to

the lack of

equipments

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that the majority of companies possess, giving a hand on

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will have a positive impact on those projects.

To conclude

, there are convincing arguments both for and

againsts

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against

businesses' social responsibilities;

however

, I believe that

businessman

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businessmen

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have a lot of duties towards society.