The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the highest 10
countries
in electricity production
and consumption in the year 2014. Overall
, it can be seen that China and America were positioned at the top ranks in the amount of both production
and consumption compared to the other countries
.
Firstly
, China reported close numbers on both sides reaching more than 5000 billion
kWh
. America, in comparison, showed a gap of about 1200 billion
kWh
in the production
movement reaching 4099 billion
kWh
.
On the other hand
, the countries
ranking third,
fourth and fifth showed close numbers in production
ranging between 1000-870 billion
kWh
. However
, they varied in the consumption rate by 200 billion
kWh
gaps between each of them.
Meanwhile, for the last
five countries
, they represented near record
that Fix the agreement mistake
records
vary
from about 600- 480 Change the verb form
varies
billion
kWh
in producing electricity, and a noticeable closeness average of about 450 billion
kWh
in the consuming rates.Submitted by tnteeroo on
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