The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years.
This
picture shows a contrast between 1995 and 2005 in the representation of the shares
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share
production
of different energy
products.
Generally, we can see that ranks of proportions stay the same, with gas and coal staying first,
nuclear and other last
, and metro standing third.
In comparison with 1995, 2005 is a
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lager
in the first two categories by a narrow margin, approximately 1%. On the other, hand petrol shows a different trend and becomes considerably smaller almost at 10 %. Correct your spelling
larger
Additionally
, production
of nuclear and other energies Correct article usage
the production
also
substantially grow and grow by nearly 10 %.
The most popular element in 1995 is coal and it is 7 times as large as the “other” energy
product group. The proportion of production
of this
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these
energy
groups changes almost twice and becomes only approximately 3 times higher.
Nevertheless
, with all this
slight changes the graph by 2005 represents the same situation Change the determiner
these
on
markets for Change preposition
in
energy
production
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