You had applied to City College recently, now the college has written back saying the course you applied for is full and they have even suggested an alternative course. In your letter:- - Why did you choose the first course? - Your views on the suggested second course - Your plan of action

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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190 words

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You had applied to City College recently, now the college has written back saying the course you applied for is full and they have even suggested an alternative course. In your letter:- - Why did you choose the first course? - Your views on the suggested second course - Your plan of action

You are planning for a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: tell him/her why you want to take a vacation describe your plan invite him/her to go with you.

some colleges encourage students to create businesses while they are still in school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

ountries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?