You had applied to City College recently, now the college has written back saying the course you applied for is full and they have even suggested an alternative course. In your letter:- - Why did you choose the first course? - Your views on the suggested second course - Your plan of action

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Dear Sir Thank you for responding to me as quickly as possible and helping me to find an alternative

course

. Kindly see my comments below.

Last

week, I applied to a Machine Learning

course

This

course

is suitable for nowadays

as a result

we living 21 century.

Firstly

, I really love

this

course

and adapt to develop my career path.

Secondly

, I love the person who teaches

this

course

, he had an impressive background. I was hoping it will open next

semester

. I have lists of the courses as you attached file. I overlook some kinds of courses that are interesting.

Thus

, I would like to pick AI courses to learn

this

semester

. I already have seen the overview

course

and 13 lessons for

this

course

. I will follow your suggestion to register for the program. I'm waiting to learn the Machine Learning

course

the next

semester

. I think the AI

course

, I will learn it for

this

semester

. I hope you can inform me

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

if the Machine Learning

course

opens the next

semester

. If you have any questions, feel free to let me know. Thanks and regards Vy

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