The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries

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The line graph illustrates the global

water

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use

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by three sectors from 1900 to 2000, and the table reveals

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consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.

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, using

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in all sectors experienced an upward trend with the

agriculture

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sector

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being the highest,

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Brazil was the country which had higher

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consumption both land irrigation and per person than Congo. Based on the chart, the

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sector

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started using

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at 500 km³ in 1900,

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Industrial

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and Domestic

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had the same number of uses at almost 100 km³. In the following sixty years, Industrial

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increased slightly at about 300km³,

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Domestic

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remained stable.

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, the same trend in the Industrial

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which was shown by

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almost doubled.

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of the period, the

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Agriculture

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stood at the peak at 3000 km³,

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the Industrial and Domestic area accounted for almost 1000km³ and 500 km³ respectively. Regarding the table, Brazil had higher

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consumption per person than the Democratic Republic of Congo by 351 m³.

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