The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries
The line graph illustrates the global
water
use
by three sectors from 1900 to 2000, and the table reveals
water
consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
Overall
, using
water
in all sectors experienced an upward trend with the
agriculture
sector
being the highest,
whereas
Brazil was the country which had higher
water
consumption both land irrigation and per person than Congo. Based on the chart, the
Agriculture
sector
started using
water
at 500 km³ in 1900,
while
Industrial
use
and Domestic
Use
had the same number of uses at almost 100 km³. In the following sixty years, Industrial
use
increased slightly at about 300km³,
whereas
Domestic
Use
remained stable.
However
, the same trend in the Industrial
sector
which was shown by
Agriculture
almost doubled.
At the end
of the period, the
sector
of
Agriculture
stood at the peak at 3000 km³,
while
the Industrial and Domestic area accounted for almost 1000km³ and 500 km³ respectively. Regarding the table, Brazil had higher
water
consumption per person than the Democratic Republic of Congo by 351 m³.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, agriculture, sector, km³ with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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