The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar chart given is comparing
pineapple
exportation from the top 3 countries in the 2009 and 2019 periods. There is also
a pie chart to illustrate the percentage of pineapple
cost components in 2019.
Overall
, not only Country
A was the highest contributor compared to the other two,
it Add the word(s)
but,
also
extremely raise its productivity in 2019 compared to 10 years
before. Country
C was the least in terms of exporting their pineapple
. All countries experienced an uptrend in 10 years
except Country
B. Moreover
, in 2019 the highest budget needed for every single pineapple
was for distribution and retail.
Starting from only 1 million
metric tons
in 2009, Country
A significantly escalates its exports up to 11 million
metric tons
in 2019. Meanwhile, Country
C has been not much different in 10 years
with only producing 0,5-1 million
metric in the period. The only country
which decreased its productivity was Country
B, from approximately 5 million
metric tons
in 2009 to 1.5 million
metric tons
10 years
later.
The most cost spent for pineapple
was for distribution and retail in 2019. Taxes allocated 4% only amongst the other 6 components which makes them the lowest one.Submitted by nurikasetyar on
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