Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to rise the price of fuel used by cars and other motor

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the number of private

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used on road, it may be the best solution but the government should

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comes from the CO2 produced by conventional motor

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which mostly use

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developing and improving the public

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

291 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental sustainability
renewable energy
fossil fuels
public transportation
carbon footprint
economic incentives
alternative energy vehicles
fuel-efficient
government subsidies
economic disparity
urban planning
rural infrastructure
sustainable development
carbon tax
green technology
demand elasticity
energy conservation
climate change mitigation

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Your opinion

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