Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals think that the most effective

ways

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to overcome

environmental

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the environmental

an environmental

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problem

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problems

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is

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to rise the price of fuel used by cars and other motor

vehicles

.

For reducing

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the number of private

vehicles

used on road, it may be the best solution but the government should

also

improve its public

transportation

system

. One of the environmental

problem

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comes from the CO2 produced by conventional motor

vehicles

which mostly use

fosil

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fossil

fuel, considered to be nonrenewable energy. The rapid growth of

urban

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population makes more

people

use their own cars

due to

its

convinience

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convenience

and less time. The impacts

for

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environment

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the environment

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,

on the other hand

, are detrimental as they pollute the air quality and make the earth hotter.

Therefore

,

government

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the government

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can

incresea

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increase

the cost of

fosil

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fossil

fuel hopping

people

changing their means of

transportation

.

This

can be effective

,

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if

people

have other options

of

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for

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transportation

.

Thus

, the authority

need

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to build its

trnasportation

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transportation

system

to accommodate more consumers. Not only is the

system

but

also

the

amanities

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amenities

supporting

this

mode of

transportation

,

such

as the comfortable waiting room, ticketing

system

, affordable fare tickets, and

safetiness

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safeties

. They are key

ellements

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elements

to build the public trust to move from private

vehicles

to public

transports

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transport

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. China,

for instance

, has built

shopisticated

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sophisticated

its metro railways

sytem

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system

with

modern

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the modern

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station

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stations

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, time

accuration

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accurate

, and

convinience

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convenience

. Now,

million

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of city dwellers prefer to use public

transportation

and they have abandoned their private cars which indirectly increase the air quality

due to

the low level of motor

vehicles

used on the road. In conclusion, to alleviate the environmental problem, it is needed to integrate its policy not only

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increasing

incrseasing

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increasing

the cost of energy but

also

developing and improving the public

transportation

system

to enthral more

people

involving

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in

this

goal