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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. What are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What is the best way to overcome them?

#people #language
It is very common for
people
 to experience difficulties learning a new skill that they are not used to it, especially if the skills are inherited from where they were born.
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example of
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 skill is a foreign
language
. In
this
 essay, I will give some reasons why learning other
languages
 can be difficult and how to make it easier to learn. First and foremost, the most difficult matter when learning a foreign
language
 is we are not familiar with the new
language
.
People
 need to understand that some
languages
 have different vocabularies and patterns. When
people
 try to learn a new
language
, they have to start from the beginning and sometimes it can be frustrating.
Moreover
, another barrier to
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new
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language
 is the environment. The local society is used to
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 using the native
language
 and it would be hard for
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a student
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student
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 to
practice
 the new
language
 in daily activities. To overcome
this
 situation, there are some alternatives to help
people
 learn new
languages
. The first one is to attend a class that provides services to learn
new
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language
. The students can
practice
 their abilities in a new
language
 and learn a lot of things from the class.
Then
, not only
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class, but
also
people
 need to
practice
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language
 they intended to master.
For example
, students can hang out with their classmates and
practice
 the learned
language
 outside the classroom.
To conclude
, it takes courage and hard work to learn a foreign
language
 because we are not used to speaking in different
languages
. Attending some
language
 classes and practices
are
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 some of the best ways to master a foreign
language
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Phonetics
  • Syntax
  • Conjugation
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Cognates
  • Immersion
  • Fluency
  • Pedagogy
  • Linguistic competence
  • Mnemonics
  • Language acquisition
  • Pronunciation drills
  • Conversation partners
  • Language barrier
  • Bilingualism
  • Multilingualism
  • Accent reduction
  • Comprehension
  • Language proficiency
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