You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
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The graph underneath describes the number of abroad
students
and local students
in Australia for a decade.
Overall
, there are
Change the verb form
is
inreasing
number of overseas Correct your spelling
increasing
students
year after year, as you can see, there are fewer commencing students
in local universities.
Turning to details, starting with 2001 only 20000 students
were studying abroad and it has been gradually increasing. As we can see, the amount
of undergraduatesChange the quantifier
number
are
Change the verb form
is
rised
sharply between 2004 and 2009. Correct your spelling
raised
risen
Then
, it reached its peak in 2010 at point
of 80000 Correct article usage
the point
students
. In contrast
, students
, who were studying in native instituties
, were 400,000, and have been growing up for 6 years, after that, it stayed steady for 4 years. Correct your spelling
institutions
institutes
However
, commencing students
were fluctuated
between 2001 and 2008. Change to the active voice
fluctuated
Then
, it steadily decreased.
As you can see, there is a big difference between progress and number
of undergraduates studying overseas and in Australia. It can be seen that after years, more and more Correct article usage
the number
students
are going to study abroad, however
, some of them staying
in Australia. In common, there are more Wrong verb form
stay
students
in local colleges than foreign
universities.Change preposition
in foreign
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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