The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.
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The bar graph illustrates data about the total world
population
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in 4 different countries in both years 1950 and 2002. It
also
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shows some predictions for 2050.
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, it can be seen that China accounted for almost 25% and in 1950 represents the highest
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.
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in Japan, the greatest
percentage
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is lower than 5%. One of the main features is that India is the only country that rose in
population
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between 1950 and 2002, and it is even predicted that the
percentage
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will increase to almost 20% by 2050. In The USA and in Japan the percentages are generally lower than in China and India
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The prediction is that the
percentage
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of the
population
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in The USA, in 2050 will be the same as in 2002, accounting for 5%. In Japan over the years, the percentages are in a steady decrease, and the
population
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will drop to about 1%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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