The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
The graph illustrates how many
books
were read by both genders at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.
Whereas
men
didn't show a decrease since 2011 and overtake
women
in the middle of 2013 in reading. As can be seen,
women
read 5000
books
than
a
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men
read less than 2000
books
than
women
in 2011. The number of
books
read by
men
slowly grew from 3000 to 4000,
while
women
’s rate was three times higher from approximately 5000 to over 8000 between 2011 and 2012 Since 2012, the number of
books
read by
men
dramatically rose to 10000 in 2013 and rose up to one level with
women
that a gradual rise between 2012 and 2013.
However
,
women
’s numbers decline to 8000
while
men
peaked at 14,000
books
.
Overall
, mostly
women
read more
books
than a man, but
at the end
of
line
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graph male values have increased.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words books, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • library
  • gender
  • reading habits
  • compare
  • significantly
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • consistent
  • fluctuate
  • period
  • summarise
  • graph
  • public library
  • books read
  • Burnaby Public Library
  • 2011 to 2014
  • male
  • female
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