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The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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The bar graph gives information about changing percentage in the number of international students graduating from universities located in eight provinces of Canada from 2001 to 2006.
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,
it is clear that
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 the rate in New Brunswick was much higher than the rest, which means that the highest proportion was observed in 2001 and 2006 there.
However
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, the lowest percentage was in Ontario, in 2001 and 2006.
Although
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 New Brunswick achieved the highest rate, the one that made the highest change was the University located in British Columbia, because the percentage indicator of the university in the first highlighted province increased by about 5 per
cent
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, but that of letter one showed a change of almost 7 per
cent
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. At universities located in Nova Scotia and Quebec, the ratio was almost the same in 2001,
that is
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 to say, the indicator was about 6 per
cent
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 in both, but higher than 10 per
cent
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 in Scotia and just under 9 per
cent
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 in Quebec in 2006.
On the other hand
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, In Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, the percentages in the indicators are very low, even the highest result of these is equal to the lowest indicators of the ones mentioned above, which means they are both slightly more than 3 per
cent
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 in 2001 and about 7 per
cent
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 was observed in 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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