The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

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The bar graph gives information about changing percentage in the number of international students graduating from universities located in eight provinces of Canada from 2001 to 2006.

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it is clear that

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the rate in New Brunswick was much higher than the rest, which means that the highest proportion was observed in 2001 and 2006 there.

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, the lowest percentage was in Ontario, in 2001 and 2006.

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New Brunswick achieved the highest rate, the one that made the highest change was the University located in British Columbia, because the percentage indicator of the university in the first highlighted province increased by about 5 per

cent

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, but that of letter one showed a change of almost 7 per

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. At universities located in Nova Scotia and Quebec, the ratio was almost the same in 2001,

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to say, the indicator was about 6 per

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in both, but higher than 10 per

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in Scotia and just under 9 per

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in Quebec in 2006.

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, In Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, the percentages in the indicators are very low, even the highest result of these is equal to the lowest indicators of the ones mentioned above, which means they are both slightly more than 3 per

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in 2001 and about 7 per

cent

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was observed in 2006.

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The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

IELTS essay, topic: Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home, why and what are the advantages/disadvantages? Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space. Others argue they should spend the money for poor people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that it is effective for students to study in a group at school, while others think it is better to study alone. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.