The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product from the IT and
Service
Industry
of the UK between 1992 and 2000 (It is measured in percentages) At the beginning of the period, the
Service
Industry
were 4 per cent of
GDP
,
whereas
IT was more, at just over (6%) in 2012. Over the next four years, their levels were virtually unchanged, with both components standing between 6 and just over 8 per cent.
However
, the percentage of
GDP
from IT sharply increased to 12
per
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cent in 1998 and
then
nearly 15 in 2000,
while
the
Service
Industry
were similar to
the
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IT from 1992 to 1996
fluctuated
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around 8%.
At the end
of the period, the percentage of
GDP
from IT was almost twice that of the
Service
Industry
.
Overall
, it can be seen that both increased as a percentage of
GDP
, but IT remained at a higher rate throughout
this
time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words service, industry, gdp with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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