You are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your University ID card. Write a letter to the local Police station. In your letter, -Who are you? -What happened -Ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

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Dear Sir, Good day. Hope you are doing well. I would like to bring your notice that recently I have lost my university identity card. My name is Mike Morning star and I am studying at West Mountain University, North bay, London. As I said that I lost my ID card as I visited a local grocery market at 6:30 PM after my study hours at college yesterday.

In addition

, I went to the home appliances section by 7:00 PM and roamed around the market. So, until

then

I could see my card was with me.

Due to

the lack of time, I quickly finished my shopping and went to near bus stop to aboard the bus, which was heading towards to my hostel Mapple house at western hill street, London. I think during my journey from bus stop to hostel I have lost my identity badge, which has all my details

along with

my name, address, and registered number as well. So, in order to get a new poster please record my details and provide a clearence certificate, which will aid me to apply new badge. Hope you will consider my reuqest and do a favour for me. I would like to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Ravi.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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