The crime rate among teenagers is increasing in many parts of the world. Why is this major cases? Who can solve governments this global issue?

Nowadays,
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is an
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increasing among youngsters concern around the world, especially in developing countries.
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widespread problem, I believe that
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poor
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and a lack of job opportunities lead to
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issue
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, but governments are responsible for
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and can take several measures to address it.
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with, a fundamental reason for criminal activity is abject poverty.
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, many countries,
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urban areas are now grappling with high levels of homelessness and unemployment.
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, people struggle to find a well-paid job and meet their basic needs,
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sometimes
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to illegal ways of making money to provide for their families. Apart from that, another factor contributing to
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common
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has to do with
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system is exclusively designed to educate youngsters as opposed to teaching them how to behave and catch up with moral standards.
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,
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increasingly developing criminal
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and engaging in criminal activities as well.
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, young people can not differentiate between what is right and wrong, thereby falling victim to peer pressure and different social groups to participate in criminal activities.
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, there are several ways in which
crime
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can be reduced. First and foremost, governments should increase employment opportunities in poor cities to improve living standards, which would mean access to affordable housing,
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and health care.
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measure would determine individuals from carrying out robbery, kidnapping, and burglaries,
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is because these activities are primarily prevented in terms of financial difficulties. Another obvious way to combat
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is by transforming the school curriculum.
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, schools should not only become
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of
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they should serve as a means of teaching various principles and raising awareness about the consequences of criminality.
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,in turn, would increase the number of low-breaking citizens. The sooner we apply these solutions in practice, the fewer people will break the law. In conclusion, these days though
crime
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is a major global
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, it is
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cause
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as poor living conditions and a lack of
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systems, that can be tackled through the governments creating new job opportunities for individuals and upgrading the school curricula.

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