Shops should not be allowed to sell any food and drinks that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree
What we eat and drink has been known to impact our lives significantly and the measure at which we consume these items have constantly been modified
as a result
of advancement
in research and technology. In recent times, some food and Fix the agreement mistake
advancements
drinks
have been labelled by scientific
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the scientific
study
as being unsafe especially, in relation to Fix the agreement mistake
studies
health
. Some schools of thought are of the opinion that these harmful substances
should not be sold in markets. I strongly agree with this
proposition as it is has
more benefits when compared to the alternative.
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has
Firstly
, this
reduces the economic effect that will arise from sicknesses and diseases. The human body system functions based on what goes into it. Hence
, an inflow of good substances
into the body implies better functioning of the body whereas
taking in dangerous ones cause
ill Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
health
. When more individuals develop poor health
because of this
, the government spends more funds to cater for their health
which would have been avoided if those substances
were banned from shops. An example can be seen in the reduction of birth defects recorded as a result
of the ban on the use of thalidomide.
Secondly
, it also
promotes the social wellbeing
of Correct your spelling
well-being
the
society. Some Correct article usage
apply
substances
found in food and drinks
can negatively influence a person psychologically and socially. These constituents of food and drinks
may exert their influence by causing poor vision, delusions or irrational thinking in people who consume them and because of these
they may engage in crimes Add a comma
,these
such
as overspeeding, theft, rape and so on. But when these substances
are prohibited, the
access to them is dramatically reduced. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, the banning of marijuana from the market has caused a reduction in Marijuana related
crimes.
In conclusion, I agree that unsafe foods and Add a hyphen
Marijuana-related
drinks
should not be sold in stores because of the deleterious effects it
will have on the economy and society.Correct pronoun usage
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