The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates how carbonated drinks are made.
Overall
, it can be seen that the process contains five main stages, beginning with Linking Words
water
cleaning and ending with the packaging of the final product. The process is linear and completely automatic.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, raw Linking Words
water
is cleaned from impurities by a filter and Use synonyms
then
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is
mixed with chemicals. Unnecessary verb
apply
Next,
there is the second stage of evaporation and carbonation, Linking Words
water
passes through electric heaters and Use synonyms
then
follows a cooling pipe which brings the Linking Words
water
into a big tank. At Use synonyms
this
point, Linking Words
water
becomes carbonated Use synonyms
due to
the carbon dioxide added before.
Later, phase three starts and in a mixing Linking Words
tank
things Change the noun form
tanks
such
as colouring, syrup and flavour are mixed in the Linking Words
water
, which is filtered one more time before being stored in stage four. Sparkling drinks are filled into both cans and bottles and Use synonyms
finally
, they can be packed to be sent to supermarkets.Linking Words
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