The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates how carbonated drinks are made.
Overall
, it can be seen that the process contains five main stages, beginning with water
cleaning and ending with the packaging of the final product. The process is linear and completely automatic.
To begin
with, raw water
is cleaned from impurities by a filter and then
is
mixed with chemicals. Unnecessary verb
apply
Next,
there is the second stage of evaporation and carbonation, water
passes through electric heaters and then
follows a cooling pipe which brings the water
into a big tank. At this
point, water
becomes carbonated due to
the carbon dioxide added before.
Later, phase three starts and in a mixing tank
things Change the noun form
tanks
such
as colouring, syrup and flavour are mixed in the water
, which is filtered one more time before being stored in stage four. Sparkling drinks are filled into both cans and bottles and finally
, they can be packed to be sent to supermarkets.Submitted by robertasottile.rbst on
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