A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  give contact details for when you are away  give instructions about how to care for your pet  describe other household duties

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Dear Harpreet, Thank you for agreeing to take care of my house for the month I am away to visit my family on vacation. As you know I have not gone back home in the

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three years. So, I decided

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year I will take my time off and visit my parents. For the time I am away if you need to contact ,me you can still call me or leave me messages on my cell number but just in case that does not work you can always try connecting with me through my home number which is +9198145800414 rather than waiting in for my phone to work.

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, I have left detailed information about how many times you need to feed my pet goldfish ,Larry. It does not require much attention but once every two weeks you would need to clean out his tank and you will find the procedure on the note that I have left for you.

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you are staying at my house can you water my plant every day and keep it out of reach of direct sunlight

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it will get damaged. And can you keep a look out for my mail and send me anything that you think will be important. Once again thank you for doing

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. I appreciate your time and efforts and I cannot wait to see you after my break ends. Warm Regards, Sonam Mehra

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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238 words

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The government should encourage industries and businesses to move out of big cities and into regional areas. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The internet has changed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems the did not exist before. What are the problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

In developing countries, some people believe that governments should give people access to new technology in order to improve their lives, while others think governments should offer free education. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.