You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Ahmed Elnahhas, recently I visited your city and stayed in your hotel with my family, I really enjoyed my staying there and I am writing to you
letter to express my satisfaction about the provided services and our stay at whole.
, let me emphasise some great points and ask to enhance others. The first point is the food as I need to mention it was great and included many varieties
as seafood and oriental kitchen,
room service was great and our room was clean all the time, but I need
to mention another weakness point relating to the internet connection, unfortunately, it was not stable most of the time and I lost it many times.
, let me suggest some points of enhancement.
For example
, I recommend putting more towels in rooms,
in addition
to that, It will be perfect if you can add more chairs too. In a matter of fact, I do not have anything to complain about it as I enjoyed it a lot. Yours Faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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