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you are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. describe why you are having the party give directions on how to get to the venue suggest how you can accommadate him/her

#party #friend #city #directions #venue #accommadate
Dear Pawan, I'm very excited to inform you of the party of my 2-month-old son which is organized in Hard and Rock cafe in Niagara falls near the Canada and US border. My son is two months old ,all my friends and family want to come to see him , it's very hard to take every day off from work ,so I decided to invite all my family members and friends at one time.you're my best friend as I always share my happiest moments with you , I can't enjoy the party without you .
Moreover
, I've made special arrangements for accommodation, I've booked the Sheraton hotel for all my relatives, so you can stay with me .you don't need to go over there.
In addition
, it will be hard to find the directions ,I'm mentioning the location { 57 20 Morse Avenue Niagara falls L2G4G2 } you can easily find out from the map.
Apart from
this
, you can text me at any time
while
 coming .It would be very appreciated If you arrive early for helping me .I know you are good at decorations .,Bye see you soon. Best regards, Navjot Kaur.
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