Although globalisation can be positive for some nations’ economies, the negative impact on local communities should not be ignored. Do you agree or disagree?

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of many countries may be increased

due to

globalization, it

also

brings some harmful effects on the local culture

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as moral

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and potential loss of cultural

identity

. On

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consideration, I agree to pay

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particular attention to those drawbacks as

identity

is a key element of the nations and lack of morality in

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generation

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future generations. One of the crucial considerations is that national

identity

should be preserved. When more foreigners from various developed countries interact with domestic people in the forms of tourism and international trade, they are potentially exposed to the western lifestyle, and they

then

will imitate those cultures in their daily life experiences.

This

negative phenomenon would result in lack of a cultural pride in national heritages and belongings among the youth

generation

if the problems are not addressed well, so both governments and people should be aware and conserve the national

identity

in

this

current age.

Moreover

, morality is a key factor in nurturing people.

This

is

due to

the fact that some ancient civilizations and wealthy nations in the past fell down and disappeared from the historical records because of

moral

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hazards that they practised. Unless nurturing

young

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generation

with intensive character-building programs, the nations are prone to collapse and

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colonialized by the hegemonic countries that hold the key

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civilization. To prevent

this

terrible future, governments should intensively implement religious teachings and local wisdom in their national educational system. In conclusion, having economical growth is the advantage of globalization, more consideration

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its demerits, in my opinion, should be given

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keeping the national

identity

and building the upcoming

generation

's character.