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This chart below gives the informantion about car ownership in the UK from1975 to 2005.

This chart below gives the informantion about car ownership in the UK from1975 to 2005.
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This
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 line chart illustrates the percentage of
car
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owners
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 in the UK from 1975 to 2005. Generally speaking, in the UK, the
number
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 of residents who owned
cars
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 was greater than that of those who didn’t have
cars
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. As can be seen,
people
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 mostly owned only
one
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car
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 in the UK. It can
also
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 be seen that the
number
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 of
people
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 who owned
two
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 or
three
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cars
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 was lower than the
number
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 of
people
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 who owned
one
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car
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, but
owners
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 of
two
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 or
three
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cars
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 kept increasing from 1975 to 2005.
Additionally
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, the percentage of
owners
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 who had no
car
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 kept decreasing. From 1975 to 1985, those who owned
one
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car
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 and those who had no
car
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 decreased significantly, meanwhiles the
number
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 of
owners
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 of
two
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 or
three
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cars
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 slightly increased.
Besides
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, expect the no
car
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 ownership, the percentages of other
car
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owners
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 in the rest of the twenty years were all growing. since 1985, the
number
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 of
people
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 who didn’t have a
car
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 nearly changed their actions, the percentage almost remained at the same level. In 2005,
one
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car
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 owner (45) was just five as greater than
three
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cars
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 owner (9), yet
two
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car
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owners
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 (18) were approximately twice larger than
three
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car
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owners
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 (9).
In addition
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, those who owned
two
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cars
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 were slightly smaller than no
car
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owners
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, owners, number, cars, people, one, two, three with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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