The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the ratio of educators teaching in Japan,
Spain
, Ireland
and the USA
in 2001 by the hour.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the graph that the USA
had the biggest hours
at each school level while
teaching at primary schools in Japan, Spain
and Ireland
had the same hours
.
Glancing at the chart reveals that Japan and Spain
had the same ratio of hours
in Primary and Lower School which is 600 while
UpperSecondary in Spain
was approximately 650 then
drastically grew to 980 with Spain
.
Another point is that Primary in Ireland
and the USA
had a big difference with 600 hours
for Ireland
and this
number significantly rose to 850 for the USA
. Next,
the number of teaching hours
in Ireland
had improved remarkably in the USA
with 800 and about 1050 respectively. Furthermore
, Highschool also
had a difference in number with Ireland
with just 770 at that time and the USA
with 1100.Submitted by linhpg259 on
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