Write a letter to a local council about the closure of playground and explain Why few children are using the playground How to increase teh number of children using the playground Why this is important.

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that the

playground

currently

abandonded

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abandoned

for a long time with

lack

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a lack

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of

children

using it. First of all,most

of

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apply

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children

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the children

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are like slides or swings and the

playground

is not provided

enough

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with enough

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equipment for kids to play .

Also

, there are some buildings

surrounding

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surrounded

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with

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by

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dangerous things

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that could

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could

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that could

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harm

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apply

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to

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children

and we need some safety equipment or med kit.

Secondly

, if you want to

increasing

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increase

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more

children

to use

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using

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the

play ground

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playground

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you need to buy some commercial

children

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children's

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equipment like swings, slides,..etc. Surrounding the

playground

is a lot of

apartment

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apartments

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and if you can build the

playground

become

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to become

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better it will attract kids from there to

using

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use

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the

playground

.

Your

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Yours

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faithfully

Samith

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Smith