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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #lives #change
Some people always do
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 things for their entire life,
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 others try to learn something out of change. I personally feel that change is always good and doing things routinely may cause problems. There are some valid reasons why some people feel the need to make significant changes to their lives from time to time. Any new situation can be a learning opportunity and
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 grows from it.
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, a new job can present new challenges that force the person to acquire new knowledge. Recently, as part of organisational changes, I was asked to move to a new IT team. I knew that it was not an easy thing to work in an entirely new team and on a new technology. I accepted the challenge and within
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 months I have well adapted to the new environment and learned the new technology. It was very hard, but the sense of achievement was huge.
On the other hand
, some people keep on doing the same things repeatedly.
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 the work they are doing and eventually they lose interest
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 the task they are doing which may lead to faults. One of my friends was a typist. He was in that profession for almost 10 years.
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 it was fine, but as
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time
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 by he lost all
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interest in typing and ended up with lots of typos in
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 he typed. He changed his profession upon my suggestion and he is very happy now. Based on my two experiences explained above, I strongly believe that change is necessary
foreveryone
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for everyone
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 interesting and challenging life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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