Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them

In
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era of globalisation,
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rapid growth in populations, motorised vehicles and cyclists need to share the same road
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which
contribute
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to many issues. From my personal point of view, traffic jams and accidents are the main causes of
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problem.
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possible reasons and solutions to
this
menace. In regard to the above statement, when cyclists and car owners use
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similar roads for the means of daily travelling, there are high
possibilities
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of unwanted incidents might occur.
For instance
, research has shown that the percentage of accidents
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increase significantly from 2015 to 2020 after the government implements the
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of personal bicycles in the city. Seeing the problem with a brighter mind, many
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can be helpful to curb
this
menace. One of the
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is by separating the roads for both
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and defining a specific time for usage.
For instance
, in Kuala Lumpur, the authorities make a new path only for cycling so that the user
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no longer interacting
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main road. Another solution is
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introducing
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time
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for doing
such
sports,
such
as, from 9.00 a.m to 11.00 a.m every weekend. In the nutshell, riding a bicycle indeed gives a positive impact on people's health.
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to deal with
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specialise
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time for cycling and make a cycling path beside the road to avoid traffic issues or accidents.
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