Solving environmental problems should be responsibility of one international agency rather then each local government. Do you agree or disagree?

In
this
contemporary epoch, a number of people opine that it is
responsibility
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of one international
organisation
rather than each local authority,which solve
environmental
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an environmental
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problem
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. In my opinion,
although
there is no doubt that the global
organisation
have high access
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aids but local governments have access
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about their own national requirements.
To begin
with, owning to several reasons that it is
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responsibility of a
globally
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organisation
.Primarily, they have access
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aids
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also
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many scientists for new innovations. To explain, international
aids
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are run by all leaders of countries in order to make better decisions,if any problem
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and all
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leaders can participate in
this
meeting . Along
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this
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they can invest some funds.
Thus
, the best scientists from every
nation
in different fields,
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helps each
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to discover new
equipments
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equipment
in the world
such
as nuclear energy, solar panels and so on.
As a result
, it leads
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benefits towards
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any hazards,
due to
large resources and ideas, which is only possible at
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level.
On the other hand
, there are some aspects
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,
local
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authorities
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able to resist or solve environmental issues. To a greater extent reason is that they have better information about their own country. To illustrate more, every
nation
has
different
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climate for
their
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survival. So, local government make new policies
according to
needs
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of the individuals. Especially,
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country
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countries
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like the Netherlands,
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make
policy
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to protect
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the forest
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forest
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forests
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and grow more plants in order to reduce pollution. In the contrast, in
the
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Dubai, they preferred more eco-friendly products
such
as solar panels and
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vehicles because
this
nation
is fully
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on tourism and travelling.
To conclude
, it is clear from the above discussion that
although
there are abundant merits of
global
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organisation
but local government is more effective towards
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nation
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or local environment.
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