the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The
two
maps display a way to approach a city
hospital in 2007 and after developing in 2010.
Overall
, the city
hospital has constructed two
new facilities to access their easier which are two
roundabouts and separated parking spots.
Looking into the details, it could be seen that the city
hospital is surrounded by a Ring road is remain the same while
the entrance and the existence of the Hospital road have connected to a roundabout on each side and these roundabouts are joined by the bus station. Moreover
, in 2007, the bus stops were administrated into six spots and in the next three years, these spots are gathered and changed into the bus station.
Furthermore
, the parking features of staff and the public have separated into two
places, the public's car parks are located next to a city
hospital meanwhile the staff's car parks settled in the same area on where the right side of the Hospital road.Submitted by jeanbabyfrog on
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