The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram illustrates the

process

of manufacturing

chocolate

.

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there are 10 steps involved in

process

of producing

chocolate

, beginning with the growth of

cacao

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the cacao

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tree and ending

wwith

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with

the pressing inner part of

cacao

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the cacao

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.

At

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the first stage, the

cacao

tree for making

chocolate

is grown in South America,

Afica

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Africa

,

Indonesia

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and Indonesia

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.

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the second step, the pods of

cacao

are harvested and white

beans

also

are classified. After that, the

beans

continue

to

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the

process

of fermentation and

then

they are made to dry under the sun . Following

by

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the drying step, the dried

beans

are contained in large sacks that are transported by train or lorry to take to

factory

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the factory

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,

afterward

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afterwards

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.

Subsequently

, the

beans

come in the roasting

process

with

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high

temperature

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temperatures

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. At the night stage , the main material for producing

chocolate

start

carry

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out the crushing step in order to separate

outer

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the outer

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shell of

cacao

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the cacao

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. Ending with , liquid

chocolate

is produced by the way that

inner

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the inner

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part of

cacao

is pressed .