Some people think that public transport should be free, especially in big cities. Do you think free public transportation will have more advantages or disadvantages?

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about

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, they think it must be free

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. In my opinion, free

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disadvantages

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and I will share the reasons. The first disadvantage

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free

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customer

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. We know that everyone who

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mass

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mostly a worker or student that

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especially in big cities. Free

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transportation

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because everyone can use

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easily.

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is free everyone who

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should pay some price for it and someone who

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a bad attitude like a thief will think twice to pay the

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. But, it will be different if the

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is free. Bad people like a thief will easily use

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something bad like stealing other people's

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. The other disadvantage that we can see from

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side. We know that

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that we should pay for

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will deliver to new facilities or

maintanance

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maintenance

, so it will

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the

government

for cutting the

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when the

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from the

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tickets, the

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only pay for 1 billion and can add new facility once a month. But the

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and might be cutting some facilities if the

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is free. In

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conclusion

, there are some disadvantages if

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free. The disadvantages are

people

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that we cannot control and

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that the

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Sentence 2 - Example
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Some people think that public transport should be free, especially in big cities. Do you think free public transportation will have more advantages or disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?