The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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line graph depicts the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. It is clear from the graph

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4 projected finances changed period 12 years.

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what is shown, we can see first in 2012 to 2022 Rates revenue with User charges increasing

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dramatic

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2500

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the second in 2012 to 2022 Borrowings with Grants and subsidies has

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between 800 to 500

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changed to remain static.

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projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand period 12 years.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

109 words

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