Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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should developed countries give other types of help

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money

to undeveloped countries.

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to poorer governments by others as a financial support.

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, they are able to build new infrastructure with every necessary

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progress.

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money

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, they need another type of help.

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investment without any knowledge. One of the best

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education or

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than just

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our whole life.

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to teenagers. They give

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of person who

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conclusion, it will be said, that

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am absolutely agree

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with giving another kind of support. Because, when you are giving something

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free, it will

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full.