Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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should developed countries give other types of help
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money
to undeveloped countries.
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essay will show my position and describe my opinion about it. From year to year, a huge number of finance is
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to poorer governments by others as a financial support.
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these supports
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, they are able to build new infrastructure with every necessary
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.
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make
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progress.
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money
,
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, they need another type of help.
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investment without any knowledge. One of the best
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education or
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Techonology
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minuses and
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technologically
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than just
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our whole life.
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and
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of person who
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exam
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conclusion, it will be said, that
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am absolutely agree
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with giving another kind of support. Because, when you are giving something
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free, it will
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full.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • poverty alleviation
  • economic inequality
  • developing nations
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable growth
  • technical assistance
  • expertise
  • infrastructure
  • education
  • fair trade
  • trade barriers
  • sustainable development
  • environmental conservation
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