The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compared the different levels of women and men in
further
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education in the UK between 1970 and 1991, selecting two types of studying: full-time and part-time.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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part-time enrolments remained more popular for both sexes over the time frame and the total
number
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of female students grew sharply in these thirty years.
To begin
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, men and women had a similar upward trend in full-time education
overall
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period leading them to the same highest
number
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of subscriptions in the ending time. To be more precise, the
number
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of men increased steadily reaching a peak of approximately 300
thousand
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in the academic year 1990\91,
while
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the woman rose sharply from just under 100
thousand
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to 300
thousand
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between 1970 and 1991.
In contrast
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, in part-time education, the
number
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of male students fluctuated felling by approximately 100
thousand
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at the end
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of time,
while
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the female students had an upward trend with a peak of nearly 1100
thousand
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between 1990 and 1991.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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