The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compared the different levels of women and men in
further
education in the UK between 1970 and 1991, selecting two types of studying: full-time and part-time. Linking Words
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
part-time enrolments remained more popular for both sexes over the time frame and the total Linking Words
number
of female students grew sharply in these thirty years.
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To begin
, men and women had a similar upward trend in full-time education Linking Words
overall
period leading them to the same highest Linking Words
number
of subscriptions in the ending time. To be more precise, the Use synonyms
number
of men increased steadily reaching a peak of approximately 300 Use synonyms
thousand
in the academic year 1990\91, Use synonyms
while
the woman rose sharply from just under 100 Linking Words
thousand
to 300 Use synonyms
thousand
between 1970 and 1991.
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In contrast
, in part-time education, the Linking Words
number
of male students fluctuated felling by approximately 100 Use synonyms
thousand
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at the end
of time, Linking Words
while
the female students had an upward trend with a peak of nearly 1100 Linking Words
thousand
between 1990 and 1991.Use synonyms
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