Nowadays, a lot of
people
would love to learn history.
However
, many
museums
need
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and other
museums
do not need
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.
However
, what are the benefits of
this
situation, and what are the
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In
this
essay, I will look at both sides and make an effort to draw some
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Let's begin by looking at
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benefits of
museums
free for society.
This
is
manyCorrect word choice
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people
's historical knowledge will dramatically increase.
Hence
, if
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for any individuals, poor
people
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too. So,
this
countryʼs illiterate will slightly decrease. The second advantage of
this
situation
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This
is
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are
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the museum any time.
Hence
if
museums
do not need money
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enter,
people
should not collect money apply
museums
.
coin has another side.
Turning to the other side of the argument, one of the main
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is if
people
do not pay
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the museum,
people
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museums
. After in all
museums
fullAdd a missing verb
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people
.
This
is
aCorrect article usage
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main factor of conflict between individuals.
In addition
, if all
museums
freeAdd a missing verb
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for capita person,
people
will not respect
for Change preposition
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museumsʼsChange noun form
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owners.
Hence
, owners pay too much money for each exhibit. Unless
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freeAdd a missing verb
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per person, they will
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not take an income.
To sum up
,
museums
are our face for other countries. In my view, I prefer the
museums
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enter
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because owners must take an income