You enjoyed a holiday organized by a tour company. Write a letter to the manager and praise the tour guide who accompanied you on the journey. In your letter – Give the details of your holiday – Explain what the tour guide did that was special and helpful – Suggest how the manager may reward the tour guide.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to show my appreciation towards the travel guide Abdul who joined us on our trip to India. Firstmost, the package that we booked with your company for our vacation to India was very impressive. We stayed there for almost two weeks visiting different cities and states and experiencing different cultures and food.
Moreover
,having Abdul as our guide he informed us about so many different things and
also
his friendly nature. He made sure all our bookings and our daily adventure list were well prepared so we do not have to wait.
Furthermore
, he even invited my family to dinner which was really kind and generous of him.
Lastly
, I would like to you appraise him for his efforts and his skills and I would highly suggest In promoting him .
In addition
, I have sent a gift card and a Note for him and his family as a way of showing our regards. Thank you once again for an amazing trip and for future travels I will consider your travel agency again. Yours Faithfully, Sonam Mehra
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