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In recent times, many people are making the decision to leave alone.what are the causes of this? Does iit have positive or negative impact on society

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Recently, the population of introverted
people
 is relatively increased. These
people
 considered leaving alone as a lifestyle that has both negative and positive
effect
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 on
society
. In point of my vision, individualism has a mostly negative impact on
society
.
Although
 some of the research
reveal
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 that leaving alone may improve the decision mechanism of humans, there are a few unacceptable consequences of
this
 choice
such
 as an increased rate of depression and eating disorders. These problems assist in increasing pressure on individuals in
society
. Many
people
 with depression have communication problems with
others
 that poorly affect the dynamics of family, even
society
.
For instance
, in Japan, many
people
 are suffering bad relations with their families because of the highly increased individualism in
society
.
Also
 in the USA, lots of introverted
people
 suffer from binge eating which
result
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 in obesity and diabetes. It is true that physically or psychologically damaged peoples are the weakest part of the chain. In
this
 condition, the introverted person is accepted as weaker than
others
.
People
 share common things with
others
 in daily life and it is part of
society
. If somebody doesn't have to share with
others
, he or she is not completely accepted by
society
.
This
 reaction can
also
 trigger suicidal thoughts which are dangerous for those
people
 and their families. In my humble opinion, I believe that individualism is harmful to human health and
society
 because of its consequences
such
 as depression, suicidal feelings and eating disorders. Being part of
society
 is beneficial
toaccording
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the
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 negative effects of introversion. In conclusion, leaving alone and its consequences are relatively harmful to human health and behaviours.
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withdrawals are overweighted
its
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 beneficial effects.
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