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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages of renting a home? Should governments subsidies house prices for first home buyers?

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According to
 the question, most residents are accommodators rather than owners of houses mostly because of cheap accommodation renting costs and to avoid
taxes
 for
house
 owners.
Nevertheless
, I support the idea of financial help from the
government
 to buy first homes to reduce the number of homeless individuals. In modern society where urbanization develops significantly,
due to
 the huge number of residential areas the price of renting is now decreased compared to the
last
 10 years. Because, whenever there is demand is ll than several feral houses,
consequently
 the price of renting decreases automatically to get at least minimal profit.
For example
, after the 1960s population of Tashkent experienced a strong earthquake,
then
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 about a million new establishments were built for local
people
 for free,
consequently
, there was the cheapest cost for renting which is a more suitable option for living.
However
, from the ancient times ofofhhumanexistencee here are the regulations for the f
government
 to pay
taxes
 for other wn dwellings as a fraction of top brass.
That is
 the point, that financially educated
people
 live by renting accommodation to keep away from extra chargers. In terms of youngsters and
people
 who have the desire to buy their dwelling place, ministers would act appropriatefinancialcially maintaining them to minimize the number of unhoused inhabitants.
As a result
,
people
 who have a
house
 pay more
taxes
 and it is beneficial for residents
as well as
 for the
government
. Theof satisfactthathich is gained by buying something expensive makes extra payments less visible for
house
 owners.
To conclude
, renting houses is a beneficial method of living since there is the existence of
taxes
,
however
 buying a new apartment provides special profit for both individuals and the
government
, so the administration of the country should help with the first
house
 purchase.
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